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cockatiel sketch by MexicanSkull cockatiel sketch by MexicanSkull
Well, I finally decided to let my art side out..again.., :lol: yeah, I know it's been ages since I submit a drawing, so I'm way out of practice. Critique is welcomed, because I really want to improve my art

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Bueno, al fin dejo mi lado artístico salir a jugar..otra vez...:lol:. Ya se, an pasado siglos desde mi ultimo dibujo y se nota que estoy fuera de practica. Buen, la critica esta bienvenida, ya que quiero mejor mi arte
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Zero-L-Killien Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hola, yo no te voy a decir, que lindo, o cosas similares, pues no va conmigo :meow: mejor hare algo constructivo y te dire lo que hay que mejorar:

1.- el pico, la parte superior es mayor a la inferior, no son del mismo tamaño.

2.- la cabeza, la nuca esta demasiado angosta, debe ser mas ancha, fijate en el ave y veras que hace una especie de ovalo con el pico superior

3.- el ala, es demasiado delgada para el tamaño del ave, debe ser mas gruesa, la forma de las plumas es otro asunto, menos importante pero concentrate mas en eso

4.- el pecho de este tipo de aves suele ser un poco mas abultado que el resto de su cuerpo

5.- la colita es demasiado pequeña, alárgala un poco mas, y adelgazala, estas aves comprimen su cola cuando no vuelan

6.- te sugiero también marcar elementos como las piernitas del ave, y en dedito que sujetara el palo por debajo, te hara mas fácil la vida si decides terminar el boceto

Practica mucho :meow:
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Forako Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
:thumbsup:
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MexicanSkull Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
:P
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yant Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009
www que tierno x3
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MexicanSkull Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2009
gracias ^ ^
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albertojz356 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
lol nice :D you should color it :P
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MexicanSkull Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
thanks =)

I would, but I don't have the proper equipment =P...(quality color materials)
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albertojz356 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
you can download gimp :) its for free :P hey do you mind if i color this for you?
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MexicanSkull Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
I see, I'll try it sometimes.

Go ahead dude, you are free to color it =)..do you want to see a picture of a cockatiel for color reference?
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fabikiwii Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009  Student General Artist
awww pajarito loco ;)
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midna-fan15 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Hobbyist
Hey that looks really great!! Try to colour it!!
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MexicanSkull Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
thanks =)

I would, but I don't have the proper equipment =P...(quality color materials)
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SweetandSinister Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2009
Ps te quedo muy bien el pajaro, pero como dijo mi amiga alba
usar ojas blancas en vez de rayadas
queda muy bien ;)
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MexicanSkull Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
bueno que tiene la gente contra las hojas de rayas xDDD =P

bueno, lo intentare en hojas blancas la proxima vez x3

gracias por el commentario =D
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SweetandSinister Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009
De nada^^
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shii-chan3 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2009
It's a nice drawing :aww:
But maybe adding some shading and lighting would make it look better :nod:
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MexicanSkull Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2009
*takes note* ok x3

thanks for the advice and for the fav =D
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malroonee Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009
Well this looks really good Alex.. great anatomy. how about adding a bit of shading to enhance the whole drawing and to make it look more 3-D-ish looking ;)
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MexicanSkull Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009
thanks dude, I will follow your advice x3...by the way do you know any tips for shading..since I'm kinda new too that
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malroonee Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009
ur welcome =]

well first you need to know the basics of good shading and since i don't know anything about traditional artz (if you tend to draw traditionally) here's a link that might help you in your pursuit =) [link]
and of course you can always search for good shading tutorials.
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MexicanSkull Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2009
thanks for the tutorial dude =)

I'll try to add some shading effects on my next drawing x3
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LifeBinnacle Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009
depende de que tipo de arte quieras manejar mi buen xwx en general el pajarito este te quedo bonito x3 solo trata de usar hojas blancas =3
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MexicanSkull Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009
Pues tipo de arte...pues el que sea..solo quiero dibujar xD

vaya que tiene la gente contra las hojas de con rayas xD...bueno intentare con hojas blancas la próxima vez x3

gracias por el comentario x3
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LifeBinnacle Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2009
a bueno xD

Lo que ocurre con las hojas a rayas es que desmejoran mucho un dibujo xwx si lo sé, hay quienes hacen obres maestras en ese tipo de papel, pero ps con lo que hacen (mucha tinta, color, blah) de cierta manera borran las lineas <w< po eso xD
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MexicanSkull Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2009
oh..ya veo..va a hacer un poco dificil dibujar sin rayas, pero lo intentare xD
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cafe-delight Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the simplicity of the drawing. it almost looks like a logo :)

Try looking into details of the animal in photographs, or other peoples drawings. (Since birds don't really stay still...lol) you could try drawing them in several poses like when they are spreading out their wings, or flying, etc...close ups of heads and feet are interesting to draw too :)

and try to use paper other than grid paper.

hope that helped...in some way.
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MexicanSkull Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009
*takes note* ok x3, I'll follow your advices =)

thank you for the comment x3
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